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thanks everyone for the review I'll work on it and by the way blondeshorhty its from the heart

I loved your use of words the way they flow but men did i not understand what the poem was about.

I loved this poem of yours it was properly expressed and your use of words were cool kee up the good work.

I love reading this poem it was beautiful. Keep writings

Your concept was beautiful as its true. But you need to watch your use of puntuation its lacking. And your 1st and last stanza is the same it gets the ...

Welcome july, i love this poem of yours to much that am not going to critique anything. All i will say is keep writing

I will not call this a poem, there is nothing in it that qualifies it. Alone its just a short note, on the other hand because of its resemblance to ...

Most of the critique has been made so i will just say you did a good job keep it up and work on those correction above

Ok you did well with your poem its was clear and straight to the point with each stanza ending the way it should. But the other part you are planning ...

I enjoyed your poem the use of words were beautiful. But your last two stanza were confusing make it clear.

Your use of words your fluence was ok i enjoy your poem just that the beginnig lost a lot of puntuation. I love your poem.

I enjoyed ur story it was beautiful your description was clear. But for next time sake when describing the action of a character its better in a bracket not an ...

That was a good poem....oh sorry monologue....did i say monologue i meant script......SCRIPT!! That didn't even pass for a scri talkless of script. It would be better if it was ...

I loved the poem but it would have been better if it was a descriptive eassy. You description is too detail and it lost the flow of poetry

Mysterious woman should be your title, work on the correction given by lilc and increase the lenght of the poem a bit